Riley Morse
I am a freshman at UNCW and plan to major in coastal engineering.
English 101
Writing Portfolio
Pre-writing
Revisions
The rough draft was not the best and needed a lot of work on it. The rough draft was lengthy and did not cover all of the points from the prompt. After peer review and reviewing the prompt, I basically started fresh and kept a few of the same points. After doing peer review of others and reviewing the prompt, I had a good idea of what to write and where to cut down.
On the infographic I had a good start but still needed to cut down on most sections. I switched the places of the header and some of the body so the statistics and percentages were less repetitive. I needed to cut down on the words so more information was displayed with pictures. Overall, my revisions on my projects this semester mainly focused on streamlining sentences to cut down on extra words.